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pretty cool stuff dude !!
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Thank you!!
Dang that is so sick Menna! That is the poster for the short? So cool. Looks like a professional Dreamworks movie!
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Thank you so much!!
and yeah It’s the short film poster
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so that’s the assets I modelled to fit the design, but it wasn’t really working with the style of the forest
{91}
and after tweaking a lot and making a lot of changes over and over and over
but also sadly it didn’t end here ughh…
the script is having a plot that forces me to make two virsions of the forest on is dead and the other is alive {92}
and that was it for the dead virsion of it {93}
(still didn’t really like it wanna make it more lifeless and hopeless but gonna see what I can do about it)
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Dang this is so cool! Loving the design of the scene! This is one of the coolest WIP threads for sure!
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Thanks!!!
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girl this looks like it came out of disney
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Girl thank you soo much!!
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the short consists of opening and 6 main scenes
this is the storyboarding of the opening and the first 3 scenes
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Dang Menna is a whole storyboard writer! Impressive! What program is this painted in?
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i have no doubt u will be in the disney cast
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Some bloom would be amazing
The portal and all would be glowing which would draw your attention to it
Maybe some vignette too
Amazing models btw
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It’s just microsoft paint
oh Thanks…that’s my life dream
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thanks!! I’m leaving the glow to the moment of switching to the living forest as the bloom is gonna act as the magic
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Storyboarding is DONE
[Opening Shot: The Magic Portal and Forest Entrance]
Scene 1: Exploring the Desolation
Scene 2: Rust’s Entrance
Scene 3: Lumi’s Struggle
Scene 4: Lumi’s Final Attempt
Scene 5: The Forest’s Miracle
Scene 6: Lumi’s Revival
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You could increase the bloom amount
I think a little bit of bloom would be neet
ykwim?
If not bloom, maybe some volumetrics?